I mean… it is grammatically correct and it describes the scene accurately… but it would have made more sense if they added one little word:
By Tyler BriggsPosted Jul 14, 2010 @ 01:01 PMBath, N.Y. —
Another body and the remains of a dozen cremated individuals were found Tuesday at the Seager-Jones Funeral Home, 4 E. Washington St.
A local auctioneer found the remains of a deceased male in a sealed casket in a state of advanced decomposition, according to a release from the Steuben County Sheriff’s Office.
The sheriff’s office, Department of Health, and Bath police assisted with Tuesday’s investigation.
Here’s the slightly better version:
Auctioneer finds body in shut-down funeral home
by Jason Whong – Jul. 14, 2010 09:41 AM
(Elmira, N.Y.) Star-Gazette
BATH, N.Y. – An auctioneer found a decomposing body and other human remains Tuesday inside a funeral home shut down earlier this year.
The body of a man was found inside a sealed casket and was “in the state of advanced decomposition,” according to the Steuben County Sheriff’s office. Cremated remains of 12 others were found.
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